The Voices

by Emma   Aug 12, 2005


Why are the voices here.
No one is around.
Alone in the dark and the are here.
They tell me to kill him.
I try to tell them no.
All i can do is pick up the gun.
I feel like running.
All i can do is creep into your room.
The voices are screaming Its his time to go.
I try to drop the gun but instead i pull the trigger.
I hear him screaming the voices are laughing.
I want all the voices to end.
I hold the gun to my head.
Pull the trigger.
The voices are finally gone.

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Emma

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღ*KiM*ღ

    Fair poem, doesn't seem to flow but the concept is a nice one.
    It seems to be the same kind of idea as the Amityville Horror. Kim x

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    oh my god, that is so dark and...emotional...

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Good poem but I agree with patrik it would be better with some flow!
    The idea was good and i didn think the caracter would kill themselve so that was cool..

    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by Patrik

    good poem but didn't really get any flow up while reading it.

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny

    That was very good. keep up the great work.

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