An Angel Story

by JJ   Aug 12, 2005


(It doesn't exactly rhyme but bear with me...its all I got)

Late one night, I was running home
it was pouring down rain
I knew my mother was waiting up for me
as if could I hear her voice calling my name
blindly I ran faster...
that's when I stumbled, lost my balance
I hit my knees and fell on the ground

like an angel in disguise
out of nowhere this man appeared
he took my hand in his
and lifted me upright to stand
Slightly shocked and dazed,
I stared into his eyes...
the deepest blue I'd ever seen
He asked me I was alright
I silently nodded my head
and he disappeared into the night...

I didn't get his name
I don't know where he came from
He wasn't wearing a halo
like the angels do in movies
and he didn't have wings
like the ones I read about
but I'm sure he was an angel
If you happen to see him
on a lonely night running home
would you do me a favor...
tell him I said thank you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Jacklyns right not all poems have to rhyme but the flow was off it is good any way

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    I agree with Noni, this poem could flow better but not all good poems have to rhyme. i like the idea behind the poem and i really like angel poem! you did a good job with it but it could be better possibly. if you fix it up let me know and if you need suggestions on what parts to fix i can also try to help with that. but ou did a good job with it and i love how you ended it!

    ~Jacklyn