Chocies on the trail

by M MEM   Aug 13, 2005


They say that people help you along the way,
but when they leave,
we're left to walk alone
In the dark
It's cold
It's scary
There is no light ahead
So there are two choices
Live, and keep going
Or
Die, and don't deal with it anymore
Each has its own perks
Each has its downsides
It's our choice,
And right as we're about to die
Someone comes
Save us
Helps us
But when they're gone,
There is no direction,
And you wonder how to get through
Death is still a choice
But now,
You see a little light,
You have a little hope,
That you can make it,
And maybe they'll come back,
But knowing,
That they are gone
and theres a chance
They'll never come back,
So let's move on with hope
Let's move on with the chance
We will make it
Make it to the rightful end...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This is different then all your other poems that I have read. I like it. this is my favorite part: "Death is still a choice
    But now,
    You see a little light,
    You have a little hope,
    That you can make it,"
    good work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I see a theme in the poems you asked me to read...about life...making choices, choosing paths...how we have to keep hope and realize there are chances... anyway, this is inspirational. :)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    I like this poem to it gives hope and light to those who need it good job i luv it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Marine Wife

    awsome poem