Exacto Knife

"no i'm not sad" is a weak line and seems forced and doesnt fit

"I cut the labels that
we paste to our foreheads." strong ending, perfect.

Are you cutting a book? Seems silly, but in today's generation books are dying, they do have labels and they are labeled as well as thick.

I think this would make a good song.. It has something about it.. I don't agree with some of the above comments.. it doesn't need to have any flow, as it already has it in its order. There is a poignancy about it, and it's so deep, that I can see how others can put the wrong connotations upon your words, however, it reads beautifully. Well done, this is 5/5 without a doubt. xx

I thought this poem was very, unique and creative. I loved the concept of it, and thought the rythym and flows was rather good.

Hm.. I don't really know what this is about. I know it doesn't sound like self infliction. But it was great that you made it like this. It really makes the reader think about it. Awesome job. And thanks for the honest comments, Very appreciated =] 5/5

`Taleee

Lol, I figured this poem wasn't about cutting. It was really good though, I liked the 'hidden' message you were trying to send out to other people.. well at least what I got from it was 'labelling' haha. Good stuff