9/11

by XxTeArSxX17   Aug 18, 2005


9/11

So many peoples lives change on this day
So many of us lost some one we love or some one we knew
Some parents lost there kids
Some kids lost there parents
Some wife’s lost there husbands
Some husbands lost there wife’s

Some many people die
So many people lost there lives
When the plans hit the twin towers
And the pentagon

So many people lost loved ones
So many of us ask why
Why this happen what we do
This was a nightmare
That no one though to come true
So many people gone
There all far away
I hope to God it was not painful in any way
I am sorry to any one who lost some one
That day and I hope you ok
Your lose was great as many others
I am sorry this happened to you
I hope that some how your living your life through

~Ashleigh~
8/18/2005

I seen something on TV about a show there going to have on 9/11 and the preview got
me thinking and this is what I got. Sorry to any one who lost
some one that day I am very sorry that happened to you.
I am not sure where to put it so tell me what you think

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Tragic event. Good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey yes a very tragic day indeed. I understood the poem well but maybe you could use the spell checker because that will help if you can't spell a few of the words. Overall i'm giving it a 5 because it is such a good piece of work. Keep it up. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Black*Rose~

    I liked it i gave it a 4/5 some grammer mistakes, and everynow and then it got a little tireing but all around it was pritty god.

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    Excellent poem i luv it good job i do luv it keep up the good work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Amazing job, i loved it, 5/5

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