The Blade

by jaki   Aug 19, 2005


I watch as you turn the blade
Over and over in your hands
You seem so comfortable with it
And what’s even sadder
Is that it looks so normal in your hands
But I can’t help my mind from wandering
As I see your perfect pale skin
With blood running down it
And the blood on the knife
And I can’t help but hear your voice
Laughing and repeating the words “Im fine”
And the thing that scares me most
Is that I know there is nothing I can do to help

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  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by Marie

    Wow it's s dark but it's really good.. i like it a lot!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Wow, This poem holds alot of emotion throughout it i really loved how sad and dark this is. Well done jaki! a good poem 5/5~mel

  • 20 years ago

    by Razorblade_romance666

    I know how u feel for i am in the same sititution all the time with nothing but the blade in my hand wanting to just cut watching it fall and yea etc but just know that i am here and u wont ever be alone

  • 20 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Thx for r/c on my poem

    I can relate to this poem good write

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