Comments : Why Don't You Have a Heart?

  • 18 years ago

    by Viper

    Bloody good poem, sorry you got hurt by that jack ass, hope you find your special someone, and yeah you are alive and kicking lol

    Stephen

  • 18 years ago

    by Becca

    Wow, tht was so sad and powerful. i nearly cried!! ur such a great poet!
    5/5
    becca xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~ April ~*~

    Awwh. Thats really sad :(
    Its a great poem..really makes you wonder what some guys really think about us girls. but it isn't as sad as the poems my friend writes. They're just depressing. But i like urs. They're nice to read

  • 18 years ago

    by TheDevilHerself

    Bj thats a really good poem i like it alot....i can relate to it...keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    Wow! very nice poem, Keep it up 5/5!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Darcy![xXkestrelXx]

    Wow that was REALLY good and touching keep up the GREAT work!! you have a great talent keep using it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Vicissitude Of Fate

    Awww...its so sweet....:( i really like it bj..It reminds me of someone i know..Who hates me..Well i really like it keep p the good work hun

    ~Mallory

  • 18 years ago

    by void.

    The harsh contrast between what is said and what should be said makes and interesting study. I like the parallel syntax of the "I'm sorry…/ I'm sorry…" and the "I hate…/ I hate…" halves of the poem. Great emotion, but not so strong on diction; i.e, I got what you were saying, and it came across loud and clear, but you used very common words to describe the feelings. This may be good or bad, depending on perspective. Good poem and keep writing!

    Cheers,
    Mercedes

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Realy powerful i love it you went deep dont at the poet in you swarm your words

  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    Whoever did that to you is an ASS... but you did an amazing job on writing.. all your poems are amazing.. You're really good at writing and i hope to hear more soon.. =D
    Love always,
    *Heidi

  • 18 years ago

    by kkly

    Dont give up on love..
    Nener know when true love will apear..

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Dat was gwd it made me cry (i'm very emotional ) lol anyway i enjoyed dat wel done mwa...luv ya xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    I enjoyed reading this poem
    awesome
    5/5 cuz its totally worth it...
    im adding u to my favs ; )

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Brilliant! I loved the rhyme...and the intense feelings that roamed about during the entire poem. Nice!

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is great it's so creative and it's worded perfectly, thats what he should have said and he said all the oppostie to me too!!!!!!!! i know how you feel!!! i love this 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Yeah, I like who it switched from "I'm sorry" to "I hate you".

    " I’m sorry that I lied to you,
    I’m sorry I did not love you."

    I think I commented this in one of your other poems that it didn't seem right to rhyme a word with the same word.

    I still heart the poem. Very nice M'Dear.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Woah! Wonderful poem, sounds like somethng my ex sorta did and said. =\
    5/5

    xoxMeg

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    Great poem!!!
    i liked it alot!!
    awesome work! and thanks for reading my poem!!
    take care, xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Good job, I give it 5/5 :)

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    I like the one line(I’m sorry that I led you on,
    I’m sorry that I was a con.)...very good i know how that feels to really care about some1 but not love them and not wanna tell them i thinkthats what you were trying to say? haha maybe im wrong? ....o well 5.5