Winds Song

by JL   Aug 20, 2005


The wind calls softly
wanting to be heard
she carries everyones secrets
but never mutters a word

It must be such a burden
to know everything
never does she complain
and look all that she brings

She shoos away worry
while carrying hope in her arms
clears the path for a lost traveler;
she helps to raise alarm

Her soothing voice comforts,
gentle to the touch
always willing to help
although she does not receive much

So, the next time she calls
listen to her song
consider how lonely she is
being alone for so long

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Whoa this one is very powerfull, i felt kind of lonely when i read it, and could relate to it
    i love ur stuff!!!

    adios!

    pilii

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    Thank you!

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    Ur welcome! ^.^ u all r amazin writers!! XXXXX
    JL

  • 18 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Oommmggg!!! this poem is so wonderful, i was feeling sad at the time i read it and, oh i totally felt the loneliness and emotions of it! thx for comments on my poems, and for ur encouragement, u made me feel alot better, this poem is 5/5 deffinatly keep it up! xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Mycquel

    That was deep! A great way to symbolise certain things! Keep doin what you doin!

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By JL