Why** PLEASE GIVE ME SOME SUGESTIONS**

by screamingXsoul   Aug 21, 2005


The blade in my hand,
is so tempting,
it calls me,
begs me.

Why dose it do this to me?
Why dose it want to ruin my life?
My relationship with my friends,
my family...
it\'s all gone.

Why dose it have to end this way?

Why?

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  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    I don't know why =(...sorry *hugs*...good poem, though....keep it up...i'm always here if you need to talk...

    -brittnay-

  • 18 years ago

    by husbandlover

    This one is awesome.try to write longer more realistic poems though.those are the best.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LKA

    Wow thats realy good and is inspiring me to write another poem =) your writing is realy good thanx 4 commenting on my poetry =)
    *hugs* Lana xoxo

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