She**PLEASE GIVE ME SOME SUGESTIONS**

by screamingXsoul   Sep 5, 2005


She cries but the tears wont come
She tries to hide it at home
She dies, not a soul comes to her rescue
Why wont the save her?

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  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    This is sad =(...it's really good....just short...like i said before, the more you write, the longer your poems'll get...at least that's what happened with me lol...everyone's different though....umm if you do start writing longer, you might want to add some more details to this, that would make it even better....sorry i'm rambling so much lol...anyways, keep up the great work and take care, i'm here if you need anything *hugs*

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

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