Cant think of a title

by M MEM   Aug 22, 2005


OK this really sux, but please comment

People like you
Are why
I am the way I am
Like a loaf of bread
That once was fine and good
Now
Just a
Hard
Stale crust
And the insides
Dried out
Only pieces of crumbs
Left
Now it shall be thrown away
My body, its the crust
My soul, the crumbs

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  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    I like the detail and symbalism you use in this, though the structure needs work, 4/5