Love and Pain

by Poetic Tragedy08   Aug 23, 2005


Do you believe in love
Like I believe in pain?
The more you have of it
The more but less you gain?

The deeper you go
The better it feels
Where scars are left
That can never heal

No matter how far
It's hard to get out
but deep down
There are no doubts

Feeling relieved
But pain is felt
Where looking at both
Your eyes just melt

Two easy comparisons
So alike in every way
Where you go deeper
Each and every day

Ya i know it's shorts, but ya, I wrote it a while ago, lemme know how it is!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    So true.. ive never heard it expressed like this,.. and thats what poems are/do.. very good job.. loved the first stanza.. and the whole deeper deeper thing,.. in a way.. it could be a double entendre if u changed it up.. lol but 5/5 u got from me

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Wow, this is great :D
    Nothing bad to say :(
    The flow was great, it was simple yet meaningful, its a great idea..
    I really liked it :(
    Your getting better each poem :)

    Good luck with the next one :D

    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody

    This is great. lobve the comparison

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