Shattered Love

by Poetic Tragedy08   Aug 23, 2005


As frail as a book
The writing has fade
It kinda reminds me
Of what our love is now made

You can't turn the pages
Find out what happens later on
It kinda reminds me
Of the day you were gone

The pages are molded
Just as soft as soil
It makes tears in eyes
Our love is now toil

I can't stand all this
Dying my very own death
I'm passing on
Breath by breath

I rip the pages
And cry a smile
I always thought
You were worth while

Cutting deep
Bleeding cold
Breathing hard
A soul is sold

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Omg i absolutely loved it, great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow this one was really good too, i don't know what to say, your a great writer, keep writing, and i'll keep reading,5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Erin

    Great poem. i really understood how much u cared for this girl. i love seeing guys writin love poems. it prooves that not all guys are jerks right? (grr they wouldnt let me cuss GRR!) lol well great poem keep writin ur good.

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    This poem was just awesome i love it nothing wrong w/ it at all good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Wow once again, your poems are so good so you can't kill me if my comments are going bad :|
    The flow in this was great and I loved this part "oh wait thats the whole poem :("
    I loved the idea of the book and the pages and whatnot its original, good work x)

    Keep it coming your a very talented person :D
    xx

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