Beginning or End?

by Drew Gold   Aug 24, 2005


And as the shivering woman looks down
with broken heart and broken spirit,
upon the once happy man
who stares right through her
with the lifeless eyes
that only the dead can possess,
"what didn't i do?"
was all she could guess.
and its a wonder he didn't follow through
with a love so impressed;
merely for the simple doubt that
whats good, is too good to be true.
and deep down, he once knew
as she now did too,
that what they had wasn't good, but the best.
and as she lay down before him,
joining together their quietus rest,
a familiar feeling wells up within.
a feeling inside her mind, her heart
her chest,
combining all three,
that this is the closest they ever have been
and ever will be

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I know this might not be what it meant but this is how i took it i thought you might like to see what people get from your poems so from my interpretation they were in love and he killed himself sooo she killed herself as well and they were then happy......i might be completly off but thats how i took it lol which i think is very interesting

    as for the flow and what not the flow was perfect the rhyme scheme was messy it looked like you were trying to rhyme at least but i couldnt tell for sure maybe you werent i dont know

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Hard2Heal

    Im speachless.. its amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    Wow you def. have talent..love this. yeah it does kind of have the same feeling in it as my poem...thanks so much for your comment. I'll go read that other one now.
    Christina

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