Inside is dying

by amanda?!   Aug 25, 2005


A shattered dream
a thousand tears
a broken heart
comes with fears

a lonely mind
wanders free at night
wakes up and realizes nothing is right

the soul cant take it
the thought is there
body is shaking
as you peel a layer

a poser
a fake
these feelings cant take

2 ways of living
connected by thought
a way of hiding for all that is not

people cant guess
no body knows
that the inside is dying
but nothing shows

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  • 19 years ago

    by EmptyEyes

    Ahh. i like this one.
    enjoyed read this a lot.

    emptyeyes...

  • 19 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    This is excellent! I love it. You can really feel the emotion coming through when you write/read this. Amazing poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Carly

    After i read that all i could think of is wow. hah i actually said it aloud.

    "people cant guess
    no body knows
    that the inside is dying
    but nothing shows"

    i like that. and i bet just about everyone
    in the world can connect to this poem,
    especialy those last words.

    really good =]

  • 19 years ago

    by Bri

    Oooo wow that was really good. That was the first one of you're poems that i read and it was very powerful the way it builds up at the end....very impressed

    xoxo

  • 20 years ago

    by keith

    Wow

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