The one that should've been saved

by M MEM   Aug 25, 2005


Every single day
I just sit here
Waste my life away
Constant sadness
Living in the shadow
Of how life should be
Impossible to move
Impossible to leave
All the lights are burning out
All the leaves are turning brown
Soon the call will come
They found me face down
Laying in the crimson puddle
Alive still on the pavement
Soon my blood will run out
And forever lives my name
The name of the one
The one
That should've been saved

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  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    I like this alot, It doesn't have a rhyme scheme, yet flows well. If you really feel like this, may I suggest something to make you feel better, Find something to believe in, or a dream. For me it's animal rights and the dream of going to this boarding school next year that noone thinks I can get into. Anyway, after I found something to believe in life just got better and better. anyway, great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Not bad, but it needs a little work. try putting in some periods or commas.4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Aww hun. Are you ok????

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah

    5/5 great work

  • 18 years ago

    by Foresaken_Tears

    I think this is really beautiful, it has no particular rhyme scheme and it's not complex yet the imagery and your descriptions were astounding and vivid. A really nice piece of work. Keep it up and try to feel better.
    xXxForesakenxXx

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