Not bad, i liked it!! Check out sum of my poems, and keep writin!!

I LIKE IT ALOT IT MAKES ME FEEL LIKE YOU ARE TALKING TO ME

That is really good.keep up the good work!

Aw Robert, that was the bestest poem ever! It had so much emotion in it. :) Nice work young Lad. Hehe.

-Jennifer.

Awe robert i loved it

Keep up the swell work lad... keep writting strong

This is a really sweet poem i really like it 5/5 all the way.

You wrote a comment bout one of muh poems so i thought i would check out urs nd they are really good. this one woz really sweet keep up tha good work =]

It was totally awesome. Is the girl u wrote about on this site? If not u should definetly e-mail it to her. WOW>>>>> I think i'm gonna add u to my fav. U were born to write poetry. ^5

Aww that so sweet! Great poem! Could you check out mine called, "dear love" ?

Ana*

Aaa that was a well loverly poem
take care
kt x

Another sweet one, i love your writting,

Aww this is such an excellent poem.

Awww thats a realli realli good poem. Thanxs for the comment on mi poems aswell, your an excellent writer.
luv ash

Nice peom you had some good ryms in there

Pretty and interesting....not to mention cute as well...thanks for your comment...and i like my poems very much...i'll take out all the ridiculous part...and the last sentence too...

Simply...beautiful