Just Another day without you.

by ~Black*Rose~   Aug 26, 2005


Tomorrow I start High School.
The best years of my life.
But I know it wont be,
Because you're not there.

It started out as just a joke,
Turned into just a crush,
Now I'm madly in love.

It all would have went fine,
We would have stayed together,
Shared the same classes.

BUT NO!

My mom upped and moved me,
Now I'm far away,
What I would give to be close to you.

No one knows,
How badly i want, to go to the same school,
To see you walking the halls,
Hear you with your friends,
But most of all hold you in my arms.

The best years of my life?
Psh no more like the worst.

[Dedicated to my Beloved Gilbert]

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  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl.. soo sad I moved in the 10th grade it was ruff for me also i left all my friends behind and someone specail also.. no one will ever take his place. xox goodluck xox 5/5 nice poem~

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Very good, i kinda know how you feel, it sucks.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    You said be honest and i dont want to be mean but like this is SO SIMPLE...there are no good words in this piece the best word i think there is, is madly when you used it to describe how in love you were....and it dosn't rhyme. i know poems dont HAVE to rhyme but if your not using food words or any metaphors i think its definatly a quality enhancer....wasn't my favorite id love to say great job and everything but im not really into this all that much i think you have alot of feelings and strong emotions and i think you could word them better if you just tried to

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    The sentences sound weird. But it's content is great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    It was pretty good! you can see your emotion in this and can really feel how yo ufeel about the whole thing, its very well written! 5/5

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