Tears

Wow that really was beautiful... It was very touching, emotional. I wish i could write like that. Wonderful job, keep writing you have a definite talent for it!

Beautiful. A lot of real emotion displayed, it almost made the reader feel like they had actually had the experience of going through it instead of just reading about it.
Really Really liked it. Keep up the great write.

Wow-a beautifully written poem. I could really feel the emotion you put into it as I was reading. My favorite line is:

''As they streamed down my checks,
they burned deep like acid.''

It really expressed all the pain in what you were going through. The only thing is the ''checks'' to ''cheeks'' error that -*»TaLeEe! mentioned. Great write! 5/5

I liked the whole thing, definately the part

Each drop was surrounded,
by disappointment's anger.

it was a sad poem but with really good words and it worked well

keep it up
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Each drop was surrounded,
by disappointment's anger.

I loved that part it was just very emotive for me, the whole poem was really well written. i felt like it used good emotive immagery and it made you feel a connection..

so even though you said dont do this
5/5 really great poem