Let mE*

by lostlllsoul   Aug 28, 2005


Let me hold you in my arms
I'll take your pain away
I'll heal hurt you've felt so long
My eternal love for you will stay

Let me buss your gentle lips
I'll take away your fears
I'll take away the fake smile
That you've held for so many years

Let me give warmth to your heart
I'll make it the bosom of my soul
I'll pamper it with affectionate tenderness
I'll make it a whole

Let me hold your body close to mine
Together we'll feel one beat
My love for you is forever
Together we'll be complete

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