White walls

by Zer0riginZ   Aug 28, 2005


I don't remember,
anything that I've done...
I know I hurt you,
I never meant too...

I cry november...
Sun is lost and so is my years...
I die December...
Watch the skies for frozen tears...

I held you hands for years,
do you remember? I will...
Mind is broken not the gears,
I remember the summit of our hill...

I don't remember,
anything that I've done...
I know I hurt you,
I never meant too...

But I did...

I think I told you to run,
but you chose to stay...
Our bond lies in the sun,
you shoulda ran away...

I don't remember,
I am forever left to try...
a story tries to unfold,
its all I see in my eye...

but its all wrong...

I do remember...
I try to turn it back...
I killed it,
I killed our love,
and nearly killed you...
I'm the one who's dead,
a ghost left in the halls...

Alone to stare at these white walls!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Everything about it seems to completely fit the entire piece. The word choice and their wording and the flow...very good. Each piece was great but I find-
    I think I told you to run,
    but you chose to stay...
    Our bond lies in the sun,
    you shoulda ran away...
    -to be a more cool part. Great job. This is and excellent poem.
    ~The Bleeding Child~

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    It's amazing just like all your others. I especially loved this part :

    "I don't remember,
    I am forever left to try...
    a story tries to unfold,
    its all I see in my eye... "

    5/5 none to less..

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    This was amazing! Such emotion. I loved:

    I don't remember,
    anything that I've done...
    I know I hurt you,
    I never meant too...

    That was just brilliant! So much intensity. Just lovely like you My dear.

    -Jennifer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ryu

    Nicely done, 5/5

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