Gone

by cody   Aug 30, 2005


Falling to the ground.
Sinking lower and lower
out of existents.
Screaming your lungs out,
till they bleed.
But nobody can hear you,
nobody cares.
As u lay on the ground.
Covered in pain and anger.
Dripping in blood and sweat.
Motionless.
Gone.
Forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Paige

    5/5 very nice!!....also very scary.....but nice! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by 0squishy5

    Hey i hope that you are the one I talked to but any way i really like it it sounds like a lot of the poems that i used to write

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Similar ending to "death." Good work. I wonder have you experienced death(s) or just like writing about it?

    Take care
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    I like it a lot, do you have a sn or myspace or something? .... i give it a 5..

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