Atypical Fashion

by Drew Gold   Aug 30, 2005


Nature's instincts lead us to follow in exact footstep the chased
but what say you forfeit the race
and run in an atypical fashion:
the opposite way?

for, isnt time likely to grace us with seconds,
despite conflicting essence?
why not embrace this patience
and learn yourself a lesson.

its worked thus far, however unexplained:
the absence of both pleasure and pain.
numbly galvanized,
we dont recognize what's gained

so build your castle in times of past or
settle in tomorrow
seal your fate with waters strength,
or drown yourself in sorrow

this is probably overly-vague for most people.. i dunn0, just my style i guess.. u might not possible know what it means, but i usually do(or like to think i do lol).. anyway lemme know whatcha think...

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    I love this. ~ you have a great way of writing its all fun and exciting - that wasn't supposed to rhyme lol but yea you did a good job on this one, its great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hard2Heal

    Wow, i really like this one. I particularly liked the last stanza. I personaly feel like sometimes it doesnt matter if you know what you mean in your writes, but if you can feel what you mean than thats all that matters. idk, just my thoughts no need to take them seriously unless you'd like too. :-) ~Hard2Heal

  • 18 years ago

    by Melanie

    Please check out my new poem Overcoming and i just wanted to say you are very inspiring you proved to me how childish my work is and since i am overcoming my depression i thought i would write about my feelings well tell me what you think good, bad, terrible, great?

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Well that one kind of strayed at the end and didn't tie together too well, its till brilliant, absolutely brilliant, but odd

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Really good job...i really enjoyed it...you are a wonderful poet...5/5 thanx for the comments on my poem i really appreciate it...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

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