My Revoltion of Summer (Rondel)

Revolted of this peanut butter atmosphere
And the exaggeration of summer fun
So overrated is the season
When sickened pores cry their salty tears

A crashing heat wave leaving sweat to smear
Thawing the people and ice cubes to none
Revolted of this peanut butter atmosphere
And the exaggeration of summer fun

Beneath a film of clouds so sheer
Break the kaleidoscope rays I've chose to shun
Revenge beat upon me by confontational sun
Exhausted and sweaty, I lead my cheer
Revolted of this peanut butter atmosphere

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

Rondel: French form consisting of 13 lines. The rhyming scheme is this: ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats.

*I know this isn't my best work, but the Rondel looked very interesting to experiment with and so this is the product. :) Here's the link to the original poem that inspired this Rondel:

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=480197

Also...title suggestions would be appreciated.