Murder Me Sweetly

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Sep 5, 2005


Murder my heart
slice me deep
make me suffer
i will not weep

you hate me
for what i've done
who i was
what i've become

kill me now
and spare me the shame
of losing at
your little game

you hate me for
my style and race
cus im a waste
of time and space

take the key and
lock the door
kill me and i shall
bleed no more

with love from the deeply disturbed

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  • 18 years ago

    by AhmadAfaneh

    Nice one i live it and rele love it u r gud at it so keep writing.. hope everything is alright sweettie ?
    Take carez and gud luck.
    :)

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Wow!!!!!
    great one!!
    the rhyming and flow was perfect
    5/5 yeah =D

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