by cowgirlstar26 Sep 6, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
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Stop the screaming stop the tears |
by wendy
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Excellent writing keep up the good work and keep smiling |
by keep n touch
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Your poem displays pure emotion. I had to read thru it twice to catch everything. the only thing i think that would be better changed is in the middle of the poem... take out the 'You' at the begining of the married line and it will sould alot better.. good work |