Goodbye

by aaron c s   Sep 7, 2005


I wrote a poem that wasn't true
It was how I couldn't stop loving you
But that was before I knew
That I had a choice too

It's taken me all this time
To figure out our hearts don't shine
They're better apart
No longer heart in heart

So this is my own,
My last poem,
about our love
or about how nobody won

Now everybody knows
I still have you to show,
You to tell,
Goodbye Danielle.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Awww, Aaron... that's an awesome goodbye poem... Keep ur chin up... I know life's rough sometimes... and love is harder... but we just gotta have a lil faith and be willing to give it one last shot.
    Love always,
    Your bestestest friend ~BJ~ hehe

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    Wow again WOW i dont have guts to do that and well WOW

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Awwwww aaron,
    Its a great poem, good luck sweetie. You're a greater poet than I am though. Keep it up and Call me sometime!!!!!!1

    Love ya
    Kala

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Hey hon!!!
    aww thanx for the comment on my poem...ur really sweet. hey i like this, i don't think it would matter if it is a good poem or not, just the fact that u have the ability to see the end and to move on is awesome. im srry for ur losses but hey, great poem. i luv reading em.
    love always,
    *rach

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny Sys

    Excellent idea behind the poem, but at times it seems that you are trying to rhyme too much.
    BUT... good work.

    Jen x

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