So wrong about you

by JodiieBaybeh   Sep 10, 2005


Dark as my surroundings
locked away out of sight
you meant the world to me
i thought we were so right

i thought you loved me
you said it all the time
but you left me feelings pathetic
broken to pieces inside

i guess to you i was nothing
you played me like a fool
if only id known at the start
that you could be so cruel...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    You have a talent girl dont ever stop writing....great flow again, pain clearly expressed, truly heartfelt

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Yea i kno how it feels
    good job <3

  • 16 years ago

    by cassanova

    I know how u feel its tough

  • 18 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    Ur poem is very sad.. i liked it espacially this part i thought you loved me
    you said it all the time
    but you left me feelings pathetic
    broken to pieces inside

    keep writing.. ur very talented

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade_romance666

    *tear* wow jodie i swear god i love ur poems ur so good and i know how u feel and it sucks so bad and i wish u didnt feel this way no more if i could i would take ur sorrow ur pain ur sins into me so u wouldnt feel it no more

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