Your Turn

by BrokenMisery   Sep 11, 2005


Sifting through the tears like sand
Looking for dreams lost in hand
Watching our memories drift away
Looking for worth in blank display

Playing hide and seek at night
I am blind and I've lost all sight
As we lie in this darkness alone
Our hearts grow as cold as stone

I sit here loosing everything I held
You sit there crying in darkened spell
Watching the monsters as they torture us
We're helpless in all of lights disgust.

Defenseless from these scarred hearts
Broken right from the very starts
We loose all control in this spiral
We cover our faces in a distorted smile

See me fall
Hear my call
Feel my fears
Taste my tears
Smell me burn
Now its your turn

*I don't know what i personally think of this one, certainly a different style then what I'm used to...*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    I haven't read much of you stuff, But its still good. I think its 5/5 material. Great Rhythm and wonderful word choice. Emotionally powerful and etc. All the makings of a stunning work of art.