Love Insominac

by Naima   Sep 14, 2005


I'm here
In a comatose state
My life in the hands of fate
Yet awake
I walk this earth
Searching for things Unseen
With each step
I awaken the dead
With each breath
I my obsession goes unfed
Sighs are my way of communication
Sighs are the only things
That don't bring pain to my being
My Sighs carry a message
Listen intently and you might hear
My Insomnia weaning near
My heart bleeds tears
My eyes cry blood
I don't know this has happened to me
What have I become?
Love Insomniac

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Oh My God!! This is such a great poem!! I really enjoyed reading this, it had a great flow. Great vocab usage. And the rhyming was excellent!! Short but amazing... I think you should of used punctuation thought. Still an excellent read, keep it up! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Another Great poem a dark one with such a great flow here!!! You are great in darkness and sad poems just keep it up

    Gene Ross

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    You've gotten alot better :)
    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Its beautifulll... one of the best poems on the site.... !!! can u pls comment on my poem "murder or suicide" ?
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Wow. its so amazing i cant describe. the words you used where perfect. great work

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