Fatal tide

by sarah   Sep 15, 2005


The water is drowning my body and everything seems so fogy, swallowing water and gasping for air, nothing now seems to be fair, swimming as hard as i can, but everything seems to be a scam, feeling the feeling before you burst, wondering if things could even get worse, this water i can not hide, trying to save myself from this fatal tide.

~ love for the ones who lost their lives and love ones to Katrina

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  • 18 years ago

    by x. Sleeping Beauty .x

    I love the poem its really great. 5/5
    x x x Zowie x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    You have soo much imagery in your poems. it makes me feel like i can actually see what u are writing about. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Leona

    Great job 5/5 i really like it keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Awesome write!!! thanks for your comments, they mean so much :D keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Heyyy thanx 4 ya comments :)

    thats real nice of u to write this about the katrina its good as well

    keep it up gurl

    sarah x x x x

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