WOW that great! keep it up:)

This is a good poem,it rlly tells the truth of what can happen

Wicked poem keep up the work u have alot of tallent
and yes tragic stuff has happened to me and thats why i write im still dealing with alot of stuff that effects me badly but u leaving me comments makes it better and encoureges me to keep writing
so thank you so much for commenting
and keep up the wicked work hun
-x0-
chyenne
5/5

Great wrk keep it up:)

Mhm, that was great! Do you sing? Because that would be an awesome song! Hope to read more of your work.

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-Jennifer.
P.S. Thanks for the comment. I really appreciated it.

I really like this poem~

Ooh, that was really good. and so true, for the heart leads us in the wrong direction so often. Love is an illusion. i really liked the wording and format, 5/5

I like how this one flowed, very well done

Wow...this is so good....your words ring so true

Thats a gd poem
you dont have any faults there
be inspirationial

sarah x x x

WOW....*catches breath* Sorry about that.
Where do I start on such a poem? Firstly, I liked how you capitalised the significant words, it really emphasised the meaning and purpose. I had to read the lines repeatedly simply because the words are so precisely placed, this was the only way to get everything out of them.
It shines with originality from every single letter. The thought behind it and the use of deep images was astounding. The final couplet was my favourite part overall.
I'm just speechless (well almost).
I usually read several of a poet’s work before adding them to my favourites, but in this case, you're already there!

Thanks for the lovely comment on my poem, I appreciate it and am somewhat flattered.

Nicely written a lot of really good wording.
Thanks for your comments. I appreciate them.

xxx cici xxx

Your poem is really good keep up the good work x

This was great

And time betrays the man who loves,
And love betrays the man who trusts.

For he who loves is doomed to cry, in pain,
And he who cries has loved too much, in vain.

that was awesome i loved those two lines your an amzing writer keep it up i really enjoyed reading this great job

This is really good. i cant understand many of your poems but ive only read 3. his is the only one i understood fully and it is beautiful plz read and commetn on sum of mine.

I love it

That was sooo insperational loved it!!

This poen was gr8..im sry u didnt get a place in my contest....u are very good tho...mayb nex time...5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

And time betrays the man who loves,
And love betrays the man who trusts.

For he who loves is doomed to cry, in pain,
And he who cries has loved too much, in vain.

wonderfully, wonderfully written. you really have a way with words here!

great writing! looking forward to reading more

shobhana

This again, HansRik, truly wonderful. Realistically, I agree with you and what you mean by most of your emotions towards how love can be and how its outcomes are awfully surprising at times. Once again, great writing and keep it up!

Much love and God bless,
FalLEn*-