While My Face Be Glowing

by Katlynn   Sep 16, 2005


So tonight I'll survive the down fall
I'll begin to hit a wall.
while I'm drunk inside my own mind.
and while i talk to you i promise to you i won't be kind.

tonight I'll do what all "emo" kids do that's what they say.
it happens twice or a few times a day.
so I'll be in my room the hole time thinking of a plan.
while i have time to pick a can.

where the lids are so sharp to make me bleed.
it's something tonight that i need.
so I'll lay on the floor.
before i do that I'll lock my door.

i left up my shirt.
just a few attached to my skirt.
and I'll make the wrists, stomach, and legs burn.
it's something everyone needs to learn.

because tonight I'll be dead.
like the pointed needle of lead.
I'll make a wish like my candles on a cake.
and for only someones sake.

I'll be dead tonight.
sooner or later you'll see my sight.
the cuts will be showing.
while my face be glowing.

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  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    It is good i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay the rhyme scheme is improving immensly because now one actually exsists im not all great at this myself but im trying to improve...words like floor and door...fall and wall....mind and kind....arn't the most difficult words to rhyme try using a better vocab perhaps....

    i left up my shirt.
    just a few attached to my skirt.
    *i didnt get it....whats attached to your skirt?*

    because tonight I'll be dead.
    like the pointed needle of lead.
    *okay i dont understand this at all yes a pointed needle of led (which you spelled wrong*led) is dead but what relevence does that have to anything at all??

    it was a good idea i enjoy reading cutter poems even though that sounds weird its very enjoyable your ideas are great your rhyming is improving...and i love to be critisized as well so feel free to fire it right back at me sweetie....good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade Lies

    This is a good poem but im not sure i quite understand it correctly

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