Ice Maiden

by Lydie   Sep 17, 2005


With each kiss
of ice
her breath
so sweet
so pure

her evilness
still
draws you near
no end
no cure

sucks your soul
out of
you
no protection
no defence

leaves you
with
no more life
but darkness
so dense

yet still
each time
she draws you near
no escape
no freedom

without realising
she's taken life
now she moves
towards
them

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    I think if you gave her more description in looks and just why she is doing the things she does the poem would have more power behind it. Plot121

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Well done! it's creative and different. yet there is not a lot of words to discribe her and the reader can still understand the power of it. well done.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Oh I liked this. I don't know why, but it was so simply stated, yet, it was still... different. An Ice Maiden, a subject than can fit into love, sadness, yet you've given it a ghoulish face. A very nice effort... i really enjoyed its flow, too!

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