Drowning in my own mistakes

by midnight♥lullibys   Sep 17, 2005


As I look back and I see
All the things you've done for me
I just don't know what to do
Now that I'm here without you

Now I'm wondering along
Thinking about what i've done wrong
How did i cause all of this
I just want something i can fix

Nothing anymore is right
And my heart feels so tight
Looking deeper for an answer
Sitting in this dark cold corner

I don't think i can make it
So my wrists i shall slit
While no one else is around
But with in me the fault is found

Where is that shoulder i once cryed on
My comfort for these tears is gone
Lying here as my heart breaks
Drowning in my own mistakes

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Excellent poem, but i really think u shouldn't do something as rash as slitting your wrists.
    what if there's more and u just happen to miss it?

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    VERY GOOD POEM THIS ONE WAS KINDA OF SAD YOU WROTE IT VERY WELL 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Very nice poem. It sounds so touching. I'm always up for a touching poem. ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good poem, not as good as your other ones. Couldn't really relate. Keep it up. *i did three poems*

  • 18 years ago

    by Gone.

    The end was good, but there was a little forced ryhming.

    Good job I'd say 4/5.

    Yours,
    Paul xx

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