I promise to change for you

I loved it! The rhyme and the words, all were awesome, really, it was super!

I have nothing to say except for he fact that it's...effing fantastic!

"Even when we arn't together"

It's an honest mistake, it's uppose to be "aren't"

I have so many favourite stanza, I'll just list them all.

"Can i deal with this fate?
What if i cant stay strong?
Is all that i deserve hate?
My punishment for my wrong?"

My favourite line in that one is "My punishment for my wrong?"

"I will give it my all
To try and change for you
Though when i try to fly i fall
I just cant stand to argue"

My favourite line in this one is" Though when I try to fly I fall."

Those two lines are my absolute favourite.

Job well done, M'Lovely.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Grrrr i hate you your poems are too good right on that sucks or something lol 5/5......loved it
Becky
xoxo

This is wonderful ...this is great and i love the way you put your toughts into wordz...5/5..

Really sweet, i enjoyed this.
Another great where you show off your talent to the max !!!

xxx cici xxx