Just want you to know that I love this poem. 5/5 nice job...I love how you started the poem...change for someone! Really cool, well thanks for reading my poem, yours are really good too :-) take care and smile.

Wow if your really willing to change for this person you must really love them i guess thats how thisgs get when you feel the feelins of love 5.5

Wow if your really willing to change for this person you must really love them i guess thats how thisgs get when you feel the feelins of love 5.5

If you take out because in the first paragraph, last sentence it would sound better, i really liked this part

I will give it my all
To try and change for you
Though when i try to fly i fall
I just cant stand to argue

expecially the third line its hot ^_^ i've had my heart broken before, so know your not alone keep up the great work

Nice imagery and flow telling it like it is

Wow...very good. the rhyming and everything was good.
i really dont agree with this poem tho. you shouldnt have to change for someone. if they dont like you for who you are then their not a true friend/boyfriend.

Deep, well-written poem. I liked how easily the words flow and how the longest part of the poem is in the center.
-Kate

You lost the rhyme second stanza what happened?

this was choppy and rough to read not your best 3/5 it was a good story line, poorly worded however the first stanza ecspecially

Nice work there so sad *hugs* great poem xox rc

As everyone said, this is just lovely. Truly amazing. 5/5. The story was great, but the rhyming did fail at times. Diction could be much better, but you seem to have improved gradually as the poem progressed. Good job!

Okay there we go. I really liked this one alot you did an amazing job. I dunno but i just didn't like the other one i guess but i can't love every poem in here anyway right? right. But anyway i really liked this one alot it shows that your don't wanna give up on him just yet and your just wondering about your questions that he never answered to you. Amazing job and i hope he does sooner or later. keep it up. keep on writing. take care dear, love always and forever.

I like this one it flowed real good i think you need to change arn't to aren't but it was very good 5/5

Wow. I love your poem. It's very well written. And I know people have already told you this, but you shouldn't have to change who you are for a person. You aren't being the real you. And if they can't love you for who you truly are, then it's their loss. But you did an awesome job of expressing how you feel. Keep writing and take care.
> Kiesha

I just got rejected, and yah, lol. Exactly how I feel, I tried to change, but it didn't work out. Anywayz, great poem, you got me to cry, lol.

Amazing.... i can understand that feeling. awesome job. 5/5

Spelling "aren't"

This is soooo sweet i knoe that tha guy will appreciate that u wrote this for him...i mean nobody is like u these dayz...very good job 5/5...u r very talented

Really sweet, i enjoyed this.
Another great where you show off your talent to the max !!!

xxx cici xxx

This is wonderful ...this is great and i love the way you put your toughts into wordz...5/5..

Grrrr i hate you your poems are too good right on that sucks or something lol 5/5......loved it
Becky
xoxo