Preference

by Lance Hardy   Sep 18, 2005


The fire in the night
The flames in the drink
A passion begins to burn
As time slowly passes

The beat of a song
The feel of your groove
Unleashes my collar
As we dance the night away

Once its all done
When youre good and gone
Im left in such awe
Of what you granted me

Thank you
For being with me
For giving these memories
For driving me mad

In oh, such a beautiful way

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  • 18 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    Dude... this is hot. That was hot. You are hot. good job. :)

    Aken Sol

  • 18 years ago

    by Lance Hardy

    I kno that the lines are supposed to have it's you're and i'm, but when i submitted it, it screwed up the apostrophes and made em weird symbols so i just got rid of it

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "Once its all done
    When youre good and gone
    Im left in such awe"
    it's
    you're
    i'm

    I liked the simple repitition of certain phrases and ideas, like the fire and the flame, or the for ___ing, nice poem! heh

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    So sweet, such a preferance, so good, 5/5, keep up the gd wrk! x x x

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