In Her Sleep

by Katlynn   Sep 18, 2005


She's shivering tonight.
holding her blanket so tight.
she's beginning to turn blue.
she's losing everything inside of her.

the lights don't shine anymore.
as the door closes on her tonight.
as she finally dies.
her last time to cry.

she closes her eyes.
she stops breathing.
she dies inside her body.
and in her room.

her mom goes to wake her up.
the next day.
but she wouldn't move.
her mom pushed away the covers.

and saw the scars.
all over her daughter's body.
her daughter cut herself to death.
and waste away in her sleep.

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  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Good poem...5/5
    Becky

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Aww its so sad. tear
    but..it didnt have much of a flow. i had to stop in a couple places but owell it was good.

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    I love it great poem great talent good gjob

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay well this poem didn't make me cry its nothing i havnt read before however this is one of my favorites of yours.....you didn't try to rhyme whatsoever and it flowed so much better then the others 4/5 good job

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Omg this was excellent it made me cry!! very good my favorite one so far...so if i was alitte harsh on your other poems...i guess i only enjoy poems that are sad..haha....my problem i hav to deal w/ ha well this was so sad and touching...5/5!!!

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