The one you love

Umm i just liked it all, i find it hard to tell a poet how to improve when i see the poem as flawless, as long as the meaning and emotions are noticable, why change a thing? i loved it, great job!

**meggie**

A sleepless night
Turns into a waking day
Looking at the sun that is so bright
All your fears wash away

I love this stanza!! Rhyming seemed a bit forced but other then that it was good!!! I really enjoyed reading your poems!! Take Care!!

I love it... i think its what everyone chases after... something to look for and find in life :)
5/5

Russell that was a real sweet one keep up the good work hun

This one has a good content, but you might want to work on rhythm a bit more.