When i die

by josh mills   Sep 21, 2005


When i die i want
everything fulfilled
everything sealed
nothing left open
nothing broken
when i die i want
it to be a painful
death nothing lite
so i can grin just
to spite

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hinata

    This one is awesome I feel the same way.

  • 17 years ago

    by I will love you Forever and not a day less

    Wow this one was a little intense.but i like it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Leona

    I feel the same way
    5/5 Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Kat

    This is great i cant really relate but i love how it is written short and to the point. oh and great rhyming

    keep up the good work

    -Kat

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    THIS IS A GOOD POEM...KEEP WRITING.

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