Once Your Wife

by Katlynn   Sep 21, 2005


The tears shed off my eyes.
the sun hits the glass.
inside of my mind.
no one sees.
and no one will ever know.
the tear falls down to the ground.
shades everything from the floor.
everything put the door.
upon the mantle.
the shatters of the own bone.
the eyes are glances of each to dance.
to everyone will see more then me.
nothing to be seen.
nothing to be known.
i die upon my life.
when i was once your wife.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    I like that

    its a lot of EMOTION!!!!!!

    GREAT JOB!!

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Good job, I liked it, it had a nice flow and was kinda sad.. keep up the good work and thanks so much for the comment on mine, it meant alot to me, I'll try and check out some more of your poems when I get the chance, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not bad...this is your best 'flowing' poem yet...Very touching. Keep it up my dear.

    DarkSuicide

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "to everyone will see more then me."
    it should be "than" not "then"

    Interesting poem. Once again, it would be much easier to understand if there weren't periods where the lines weren't supposed to end. Poetry has commas and run on sentences as well, it does not require a period at the end of every line.

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    I thought it was good i didn't understand the part about the door and the mantle but it still was very good

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