Beautiful death

by dwight   Sep 22, 2005


I am in danger of drying out

that is how much I cry

you hand my water

but you pour it over me

you want me to die beautiful

rather than to live ugly

My eyes are dripping with tears

you do not care for me

all you got in mind

is that the blue you love is lost

and replaced my sad red

You want me to be

what I can not

Thats how simple it is

but you don't understand

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  • 18 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet

    Danke fürs kompliment.Your poems were excellents.I like it!

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Nice poem Dwight...I like what it was saying...Thank you for commenting on my poem..do u have ne suggestions for the desciption of the last word???
    Joclyn

  • 19 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Really good poem! 5/5
    Well, I'm really sorry that you went through so much pain...and that you'd cried so much. Hope things are better now. Take care and thanks for sharing your poem with us, keep it up ^_^

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