Final Note.

by cαtαstrophe--x   Sep 24, 2005


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There once was this girl,
who you thought had this perfect life,
never getting to know her,
what she deals with every night.

Sitting in her room,
all these thoughts crossing her mind,
whys this world so cruel to her,
thoughts of suicide did come by.

This girl is always lonely,
never does she get her way,
always standing at the cross roads,
as the others go on their way.

She once had the perfect person,
understood her every need,
one day that person faded,
while the girl was left to bleed.

As her life moves on,
temptations do come by,
as she sits in her room,
she tries so hard not to cry.

She took her only trusting friend,
and asked it to please try,
"take away my pain", she said,
"just make this all subside."

As she took her final breath,
she wrote one last note,
explaining why she did this,
pen to paper she scribbled her life's joke.

"To anyone who cares", she wrote.
"This is my final note,
as I hold my trusty razor blade,
my life will surely float.

This will be my first and last time,
that I tell you how I feel,
I can't take this pain anymore,
It's like I'm drunk at the steering wheel.

I can't take one more lonely day,
as a dread my lonely night,
as memories of good and bad,
float by my bed side.

I feel like I can't compete,
even if I tried,
I'm not meant for anyone,
My feelings I did hide.."

As crimson tears flow down her arm,
she says her last words,
"I love you",
And thats the last thing that I heard.

(C) Rachel 2005.
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  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Wow amzing poem very sad and deep shows the hurt almost like you can feel it by reading it nice job 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Wow.. Im loving that Poem...Fantastic Great Job
    5/5
    ttyl sometime
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    I can relate to this poem.. good job.. i ;ve written stgh like this oso so i know wad u feel about it.. stay strong..

  • 18 years ago

    by Heart Broken Angel

    Loved your poem very emotional Thanks 4 my comment but that is the way i feel in my poem : My friend the knife ..
    Sorry if it doesn't seem like it you can always give me tips to make my writing better : UKprncs@hotmail.com
    Would appreciate it !
    Well great poem
    luv Crystal !!
    Keep up the great work !!

  • 18 years ago

    by not.your.star....

    Wow I love this poem....It has a lot of meaning and I can relate. Keep on writing,
    Luv Misty