Searching in the abyss

That was great. i feel like that a lot. i really loved it. it was beauitful. keep up the good work
Emma 5/5

Magnificent.

-Taylor

I liked this line
As though nothing else exists
Sight is darkened into the abyss
but i didnt like the ending of it.. but by far one of the best poems i have read of yours. 5/5

That was really deep, but I liked it. a lot.
I get that feeling too, of being too light, just floating about...

Good Writing!
beth

I think I like this poem best so far, I like the air of mysterious wonder it seems to give off.

My favourite lines were:

"
Darkness surrounds with pastel glow
Time moves forward though much to slow
Light as a feather you search for the floor
Pray for the wind to blow no more"

I absolutely heart the last line. =)

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