Let The Sky Fall Tonight

by Renee   Sep 26, 2005


Kiss me like the stars are falling tonight
your lovely scent will be my last breath.
My lips will catch every tear you -never- cried.
Who cares if this isn't really our last goodbye.

I just want to see you smile, like it's all I've got left.

I'm holding you close baby, tonight is our night
We'd die for the sake of being in each others arms.
Stay here, my heart is safe and you'll forever have that place.
This world is cold, but I won't let them take you away.

Look me in the eyes, make this night seem like forever.
The stars fall in slow motion and we'll catch them all together.
I'll kiss your fingertips where the pointy ends break your skin
and I'll keep you in my arms when it seems we can't win.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow very nicely written.. i especially love this poem! its so sweet/passionarte and very nice! i could never write that well. i esp. liked this part:Look me in the eyes, make this night seem like forever.
    The stars fall in slow motion and we'll catch them all together.
    Anyways very nice job your an awesome poet i cannot wait to read more! xox 5/5 overall!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Beautiful poem I like your style

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Wow, this is my new favorite from you. It's so deep and powerful, and your sentence structure is incredible, like, the words...You put your sentences in a way that it's the same as someone just describing their love, but you twist it into your own words and make it so creative, it's beautiful. I greatly admire your talent... The whole thing was stunning, I loved the beginning the most I think though. Such a beautiful love story and an amazing dedication, anyone who has your love is so lucky...You're an amazing girl, Renee, I love you so much. EE> Take care, okay? EE> xxxxx love you.

    Love always,
    Your pretty pistol.xx

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