The Memory

by Lady Vengeance   Sep 27, 2005


I hear the drums beat in my ears
the screams of pain are very near.
I lunge forward with my knife.
this war made me take a life.

Back home the people scream for peace,
Myself i wish for sweet release
My comrades fall, their bodies torn
My life, my soul, my friends are gone.

When this is over i shall weep,
and constant nightmares will haunt my sleep
The sounds of war will never end
My broken heart will never mend...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dracula

    Lol, i know u've written better. the improvement is obvious : )

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Awesome poem - I've been wanting to write a war poem for a while but I seem to fail rather often.

    and constant nightmares will haunt my sleep

    I think that line was a little too long and ruined the flow . . . but it picks up quickly so the dent is only small.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    That was so cool I loved it no matter what anyone says Suz you are great
    Love
    Em

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    Godd poem but i don't really like the whole 2 by 2 rhyming, u know lik when every 2 lines rhyme.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    This is worthy of publishing. it depics a the effects of war so perfectly.

    Ruby

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