What we don't know

Suzie, your an Aromagnome.

"The ripple of water
And murmur of fear
Confusion consuming
What once was held dear"

Excellent rhythm!
Really well written. Your choice of vocab was spot on and you've done a brilliant job with the imagery
Well done
5/5
*gem*

It had very amazing flow to it... each line flowed to the next, as well as each stanza. Therefore it was very easy to read it. Nice juxtaposition with the hell/heaven stanza. Very much stood out :-)
5!

I agree with what he just said, but with out the apathy :P. jks dan.
Great work, thanks for commenting on my latest poem. Yes i did write it, everything except the bits in "man that you fear".

Matty
xoxo

Wow, I like I like. Yet again, your flow is seamless. I like the vibe this poems has, and i always like poems about society and stuff like that, when they're good. And I like this one.

My favourite part was :
This day holds our fate
With a sweet satisfaction
The day of our dreams
And time of god's action

I just like it. lol

Your make good points in your poetry. Very nice work!

President