Without you

by Lady Vengeance   Sep 27, 2005


The stars will always shine above
the moon will always glow
but of the love i felt for you
only i will know

Summer comes before the fall
winter before the spring
to have you back for just one day
I'd give anything

The sun spray golden rays of peace
the mountains meet the sea
the world would be a better place
if you were here with me

rain falls upon my broken soul
my heart beats with the hail
the shattered sounds of our past
will soon begin to fail

*i wrote this along with all my other entries, plz don't copy it*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dracula

    Lol AKA. i loved it : )

  • 17 years ago

    by Dracula

    GREAT!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    These kind of poems arn't really my cup of blood, but it's good none-the-less

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Using the weather through out is a wonderful idea. i can see why ur worried it will be copyied. great work.
    thanks for your comment, it means alot

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    Your so good at this Suzie, I think this one is great too.