No title...for now

by Kurt   Sep 29, 2005


Pictures flash
Memories burn
Life of ash
It's your turn

They say its ok
They say its fine
The pain goes away
It just takes time

All i feel is hurt
I can't believe
You treated me dirt
Caused me to grieve

I thought i loved you
But you ruined that
Guess it was never true

I dont know why but i can't find ways to end my poems... its been a long couple weeks... gimme a while and i'll get them fixed. Until then just kinda turn a blind eye to abrupt endings.

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  • 14 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Maybe some poems shouldn't have an 'ending' because you're still feeling the emotions that drove you in the first place to such an experience. The only thing you should fix is the length, keep writing :)

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Wkd poem. and its not about if they sound good that matters its about whats coming from inside. keep up and cheers 4 checkin out my poems:) 5/5 jess xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    That was good actually. Dont worry, I never find the right endings from such a good start. I know how you feel as well, it pretty much sucks. But you have to kinda bear with such moronic people, it will (hopefully) be better later in life. Nice Work!

    -Jennifer.

    P.S. Don't change your work, nothing can be improved if it comes from the heart.

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